It's been a while since I commented on this, but it's still going strong.
I do get the impression that I missed a few bits here and there. Maybe a reread some time will fix that.
Contrary to the other commenter, I'm not entirely sure about Warren redeeming himself toward Katrina. He did do a lot of fucked up things, and then for her to forgive him so fairly easily seems... I dunno.
That's just one thing, however. Keep up the good work!
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Date: 2006-08-14 10:27 am (UTC)I do get the impression that I missed a few bits here and there. Maybe a reread some time will fix that.
Contrary to the other commenter, I'm not entirely sure about Warren redeeming himself toward Katrina. He did do a lot of fucked up things, and then for her to forgive him so fairly easily seems... I dunno.
That's just one thing, however. Keep up the good work!
XWA